Wikivoyage/Logo 2013/Finalist review/Flying plane

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{{subst:Wikivoyage/Logo/2013/Mod
 |title = The title you chose for your modifications
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Flying plane

The original submission. edit

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Sidebar
 
135px
 
 

App-Style
 
64px
 
32px
 
16px


 
 
 
 
 

Comments and discussion edit

The logo will look better with transparment backcolor, and that at the 32px and the 16px versions will be without the "wikivoyage". בנימין (talk) 15:10, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All submissions should probably choose the same background type (white or transparent) for the final vote. I'll ask about that. --Peter Talk 17:32, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I believe two modifications are needed before the final vote, both of them just for the 32px and 16px versions:

  1. Remove text
  2. Make the icon "fatter"

Globe-trotter, are you working on these modifications? --Peter Talk 17:32, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Weight of text is too light. Not clear to read. This, that and the other (talk) 11:56, 16 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Translation edit

I flipped and translated it to Persian to show how it will look on a RTL language --ebraminiotalk 15:31, 12 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

 

Transparent flying plane and favicon wo wordmark edit

 

Sidebar
 
135px
 
 

App-Style
 
64px
 
32px
 
16px


 
 
 
 
 
as per discussion above; favicon still needs more love, I think Rillke (talk) 22:31, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments and discussion edit

Votes for Transparent flying plane and favicon wo wordmark edit


Transparent flying plane and favicon wo wordmark II edit

 

Sidebar
 
135px
 
 

App-Style
 
64px
 
32px
 
16px


 
 
 
 
 
as per discussion above; favicon contorted, with contrails Rillke (talk) 14:39, 15 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments and discussion edit

Votes for Transparent flying plane and favicon wo wordmark II edit

No wordmark, contrailed favicon edit

 

Sidebar
 
135px
 
 

App-Style
 
64px
 
32px
 
16px


 
 
 
 
 
I think the favicon needs something more... here's an attempt. LtPowers (talk) 15:48, 15 August 2013 (UTC) LtPowers (talk) 15:48, 15 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments and discussion edit

Votes for No wordmark, contrailed favicon edit