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You seem to be working on this essay. Thank you for improving the wiki with your contributions. It seems to be needing a more work before being published on main space, so I have moved for your own space for now..
If I may, I wouldn't use the reference to "Wikimedia Foundation" as if they were the Wikimedia community or their projects. Also, unless you are talking specifically about English Wikipedia, I would try to write it on a less English Wikipedia centered way. I hope this have been helpful.