International Wikinews Writing Contest 2/log/May 28

May 28

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    • Approved, though I need to state once again: PLEASE make your articles longer. Paragraphs should be 3-4 sentences each. Ral315 (talk) 16:24, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
      • Ral, just a note here; news style usually calls for short paragraphs, and one-sentence paragraphs aren't unusual. Two of the top stories on CNN.com tonight averaged 1.5 and 1.2 sentences per paragraph. 3-4 sentences/paragraph seems a bit much. You might be looking for more sentences overall. KeithH 07:42, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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