Grants talk:APG/Funds Dissemination Committee/Draft Charter of the Funds Dissemination Advisory Committee
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Sj in topic Refactoring the top bullets
Copyedits edit
I implemented the abbreviations noted in parentheses in the first section, unifying usage in the rest of the page. I also cleaned up some grammar issues. –SJ talk
Refactoring the top bullets edit
Current text:
- The Committee, in conjunction with the Executive Director, shall present the Board with written recommendations regarding funds dissemination, based upon its review of the applications, submissions, deliberations, and discussions. The Committee’s actions shall be guided by the best interests of the Wikimedia mission and movement.
- The Committee shall make such recommendations subject to the budget set forth by the Board. The recommendations shall be designed to best advance the Wikimedia mission.
Proposed replacement:
- The Committee, in conjunction with the Executive Director, shall present the Board with written recommendations regarding funds dissemination, based upon its review of the applications, submissions, deliberations, and discussions. These recommendations shall be subject to the budget set forth by the Board.
- The Committee’s actions shall be guided by the best interests of the Wikimedia movement, and its recommendations designed to best advance the Wikimedia mission.